My college essay

My College Essay

Hello my name is Andres Montano and i want to go to college so i could go have a good future.I could describe myself by a good leader but sometimes i might go of task.I could also describe myself by friendly person.I’m a friendly person because i don’t like violence.

Now I’m going to talk about my community.My community is cool but to many gangs everywhere in Oakland,Ca.It’s dangerous being in the streets because you never know what could happened.I’m saying this because a lot of people steal and fight in Oakland ! Now i am going to tell you how can you get respect.You could get respect by you respecting them so they respect you.My community Oakland is one of the tops that is more dangerous.Is dangerous because a lot of gangs and a lot of violence !

   

I could also describe myself has a smarty person.I describe myself like this because when i want to I really focus and i work hard.I want to go to college because i want to have a good future and also so i could have a good education.I’m very happy because I’m going to be the first one to go to college out of all my family.  

   

My challenges for me in school is paying attention in class.Also there’s a lot fake friends that are just talking smack behind your back.Another challenge is to do work that you don’t understand.I’m going to explain the first reason when the teacher is talking I interrupt and I don’t pay attention.Also school is school is challenging because sometimes we do things that we haven’t learned.